Doing Your Homework

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Write what you know, every­one says. If I did that, I’d have writ­ten one (maybe) very bor­ing book. Write what you can learn is a much bet­ter piece of advice. Since I’ve never been a cop or a covert ops spe­cial­ist, I have to rely on research to make my books ring true.

The Inter­net makes doing research much eas­ier than it was in days of hav­ing to go to the library, but it’s not your only resource. It’s a great place to start, but some­times you need more.

I’ve been work­ing on a sequel to DEADLY SECRETS. As read­ers of this blog know, I’m not much of a plot­ter, so I don’t do a lot of research until I come to a place I need the details. After all, if I don’t know what’s going to hap­pen next, I can’t very well be look­ing it up, can I?

DEADLY SECRETS is set in a small town. Not want­ing to get into the Jes­sica Fletcher/Cabot Cove Syn­drome, I didn’t want another graphic homi­cide to be the back­bone of the new book. After all, the mur­der in DEADLY SECRETS was the first homi­cide in decades in my made-up town of Maple­ton, Col­orado. Thus, I decided to use a cold case as the basis for the new book.

NOOK Simple TouchNook Con­test Ques­tion #7 (Remem­ber to use the Con­tact Form to answer the ques­tion, and put “Nook Con­test” in your response.)
What tele­vi­sion show do I credit with my start in writ­ing?

And now, back to today’s post:

First deci­sion was to fig­ure out how the cold case comes to the atten­tion of my cop hero. I decided to have it based on a dog dis­cov­er­ing a bone. I wrote about 5 chap­ters before I con­sulted one of my expert friends to find out whether my cops had done an accept­able thing in dig­ging up the area where the bone was found and bring­ing every­thing back to sift through the dirt in more favor­able conditions.

What he told me was that if there was any pos­si­bil­ity the bone was human, that the cops would have to call in the Coroner’s Office imme­di­ately and leave the bone where it was. Yikes! Who knew?

Now, I could have had the per­son who found the bone (an Ani­mal Con­trol offi­cer) not know this and bring the bone to the police sta­tion, but my expert told me that every­one would have been trained in pro­ce­dure, and the last thing I wanted was to have my cops be stupid.

Rewrite. Note to self: check facts before writ­ing 5 chap­ters based on an assump­tion, no mat­ter how log­i­cal it seems. I ended up hav­ing a very infor­ma­tive chat with some­one at the Coroner’s Office. After I apol­o­gized for tak­ing up his time, he said he was more than happy to help some­one get things right, since there’s so much wrong infor­ma­tion out there, espe­cially on television.

Next plot point to research: one of my eccen­tric char­ac­ters was blow­ing up tree stumps on his prop­erty. Is this legal in the county on which I’m bas­ing my book? If it’s not legal,ll my cop will behave dif­fer­ently than if it is. An Inter­net search of the Sheriff’s Office’s web­site yielded a con­tact infor­ma­tion offi­cer. I emailed her and she was happy to pro­vide me the answer I needed, plus a lit­tle bonus information—I’d given my char­ac­ter 30 acres, but the PIO informed me that if he had 35 acres, he’d avoid a lot of zon­ing reg­u­la­tions. Find/Replace. My char­ac­ter now lives on a 35 acre property.

Some tips:

1. Cul­ti­vate sources. These can be your friends, peo­ple you meet at con­fer­ences, on line, on an air­plane, in line at the movies. You can ask a doc­tor, your nail tech—anyone who knows more about the field in ques­tion than you do. I belong to a num­ber of Yahoo groups that are filled with experts will­ing to help writ­ers get their facts straight. These focus on crime fic­tion, but there should be groups you can tap in any field.

2. Use the Inter­net to find the local agency/organization/expert. Most will have con­tact infor­ma­tion. If you’re shy, email is a great way to start. But, if you explain that you’re writ­ing a book, I’ve found most peo­ple are happy to help. For ROOTED IN DANGER, I searched Face­book look­ing for a pilot who would answer a cou­ple of ques­tions, and he not only responded, but took an active inter­est in help­ing me get things right through­out the book..

3. Use the phone. Usu­ally, the per­son who answers the phone isn’t going to be the per­son you need, but they’ll know where to trans­fer your call. And, with only 1 excep­tion, I’ve always been called back.

Next week, I’ll be back talk­ing about what to do with all these facts you’re going to get.

 

17 thoughts on “Doing Your Homework

  1. Terry, I’m not much of a plot­ter either, so I do what you do — when I get there, I research it. I have to know enough to project myself into the scene — never mind if the infor­ma­tion gets into the novel (explic­itly) or not. For my cur­rent WIP, a sci fi novel, I researched the World Court and its mis­sion because one of the courts in the novel is sup­posed to have a sim­i­lar one. I usu­ally have to do the research before I can write any­thing about it {gri­mace} because oth­er­wise I’m not “there.”

    • I’m okay sketch­ing out the basics of a scene (right now, I’m writ­ing one on a search by a cadaver dog), but I get the ini­tial infor­ma­tion, then write the scene, then see if my con­sul­ta­tions with experts require tweak­ing. Of course, if I can reach my con­sul­tants first, that helps, but too often there’s a delay, and I don’t want to stop writing.

  2. Exel­lent post, Terry. Lit­tle jars read­ers more than hap­pen­ing upon a fac­tual error. It rips the reader out of the story and can destroy reader trust, mak­ing dif­fi­cult to read on.

      • Yes — and if you’re lucky, you’ll find these peo­ple BEFORE the book is pub­lished. I owe a crit part­ner dearly for telling me the High­lander SUV doesn’t come with a man­ual trans­mis­sion! Never thought to look that one up.

  3. Terry, excel­lent post and so true. My sec­ond book which is due out in Jan­u­ary 2013 Burn in Hell, A Jake Car­ring­ton Mys­tery was fun to write because I knew my sub­ject so well. I worked at a ceme­tery for over ten years as office man­ager and assisted in cre­ma­tions. So I took that, mixed it up a girl with a gam­bling prob­lem, who owes the mob money and to make mat­ters worse have her dat­ing a cop. Fun, Fun Fun.. PS I love your blog.

    • Thanks, Mar­ian — and I’m sure you talked to gam­blers and cops, too!

  4. Some­times, it’s all in the details. I had a plumber hero and had to research plumb­ing. I have a hero­ine look­ing for a spe­cific hand­bag and had to research the hand­bag because it was made in the six­ties. A hero baker–talked to a baker. It makes the dif­fer­ence. Good post!

    Mur­der she wrote? LOL

    • Vicki, yes, I’ve researched lux­ury vehi­cles, expen­sive men’s suits, and just about every­thing else. I’m lucky that my brother is/was a cook/chef with a pas­try spe­cialty. He was golden for Sav­ing Scott (and sev­eral of the recipes I share in that book are his)

  5. Great tips, Terry. I had to laugh at your “notes to self”. I have done the same thing when I dis­cov­ered an assump­tion was not cor­rect, or what worked in a pre­vi­ous novel no longer applies.

    • Writ­ing mod­ern day sto­ries means tech­nol­ogy will prob­a­bly be obso­lete before you get the book pub­lished. So, far, about 90% of my cadaver dog scene is “accu­rate” and the other details seem to be “could go either way,” but I’d never trust my instincts.

  6. Nice research tips. What has been your favorite thing to research?

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    • bn, I sup­pose my ‘favorite’ would have been the recipes for Sav­ing Scott. After all, some­one had to test them to make sure they were good!

  7. Hey Terry, I have found the same prob­lem. I fin­ished my book and began revising/rewriting it. Then I sat down brain­stormed with my brother-in-law he pointed out plot holes. Well darn that way won’t work. So I began again chang­ing loca­tions. I bogged down again. Then it dawned on me how to begin it again. I did con­tact Hon­olulu PD with some ques­tions, my story is based in Hawaii, about where the detec­tives would be located. I went to another loop for a ques­tion when sev­eral peo­ple poked holes in the way I had han­dled hand­ing off a tod­dler. By brain­storm­ing with two friends I found a way to work it. Now I’m happy to say I can keep most of what I’ve writ­ten with a few dele­tions and addi­tions. Good luck with yours Terry. I’m not a plotter/planner. :-)

    • the hard­est part of research is know­ing what you don’t know so you can research it.

  8. Hi Terry,
    Loved your blog today. As a reader, noth­ing irri­tates me more than really being involved in a book, totally lov­ing it & then all of a sud­den there is some­thing writ­ten that I know is com­pletely inac­cu­rate. It can make it dif­fi­cult to trust that what the author has writ­ten in the rest of the story is accu­rate. I can think of maybe two or three titles where it was bad enough that I was unable to fin­ish the book.

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    • That’s so true. Make one mis­take and the reader will won­der what else you got wrong. Reader trust is critical.

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